This is our updated proposal with our feedback addressed.
OUR FEEDBACK FROM SHOWBIE:
"The first page is full of relevant information, however it needs to be spread over more pages and elaborated upon further. Keep the first page as a summary, them give me a page with more detail about the song and what it is about exactly. Then add a page called Treatment and explicitly state if your video will be performance, narrative, concept or a mixture. Then explain the vision behind each strand. Give me a sense of lighting, colour and mood. Your three act structure is really good, but would benefit from pictures on the page to visualise the concept and detail about the meaning behind your visual choices. On the inspirations page, be more specific about what elements you would like to borrow from these music videos. Add screen shots to visually justify your points."
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