This is my very first project for Media Studies, made to practice editing.
EVALUATION
Now I've learnt from studying media, I know much more about composition and the way in which things are filmed. Doing this again, I would probably make more of a cohesive storyboard and ensure different shot types are used.
Excellent effort in story telling Eleanor, well done! Some very solid sequences and effective use of jump cuts - nice work.
ReplyDeleteThere is one random shot that has natural sound, which jars the audience.
Putting the audio back in and smoothing it out would be a great exercise in using L-cuts and J-cuts. Also music would help to move the action along.